Rapid55's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Electrolux]

You should really cut down the low frequencies and find a decent bass for this. The "Hurr" sound in the background is very annoying. Otherwise it's good although a bit too repeative.

broseph120 responds:

thanks i appreciate the review, i will definitely take that into consideration. And i know its repetitive, its just a very short loop repeating a bunch of times lol i plan on working on this more tho and expanding it into an actual song. its kinda funny you commented on this...i was just looking at one of your tracks earlier today :P

[Ragequit (Demo)]

Very nice wobbles! Love it. Should be longer though.

zlarke responds:

Thanks for review! Yeah, it's a work in progress. The final one will be longer for sure.

[Unfinished]

Very nice mixing and all but it sounds like it's off note at times.

Shin0bid0 responds:

if u ment slides then yes, it does. It is supposed to be that, but it need to be improved and so...
As title says it is unfinished.

Check my yt.com channel
http://www.youtube.com/user/WhereRmYFuCKINGkeYs?feature=mhee

[Voyage]

I liked some bits of it. The chords and instruments are nice and it's got this nice punchy kick.

But the problem is I can't really tell which is intro and where the real song starts.

At around 0:50 (when the snare goes out) or so it sounds as if the song had just started over. Also around 1:05 or so the stopping is a bit too instant and again it gives the feeling that the song just started over because I was expecting a drop rather than another careful build-up.

It also needs a main melody over the chords, maybe something with a soft synth. The bass should be present more since right now you can only hear it for 30 like seconds or so.
The noise effect is used a bit too much I think and because of that it sounds pretty random at times. Use it only at the drop points and you should consider sidechaining it to the kick. Also besides noise you can use some crashes and reverse crashes to make the drop bigger.

Keep it up! Work on the song structure.

[R4BBIT - Where are you]

Nice melody and tough kick! Awesome, keep it up.

Ihan kateus iskee kun tietää että oot mua 7v nuorempi ja teet 10x parempaa musaa kun mä! :D

r4bbit responds:

:DD kiitti

[Tetrix(Tetris dubstep)]

I didn't like it

Maybe you should change the melody a bit when the dubstep part starts. Otherwise it'll just be boring. The end (1:23->) was ok.

[~Electro House 2012~]

Amazing track!

Very nice lead and melody! Everything goes well with each other. Amazing drop at 3:25. Good job! I'll definately check some of your other submissions.

keosni391 responds:

Big Thanks, glad you like it ;)

[Sun Burst]

Cool

It sounds nice but could really use some bass. I liked the variety in drums.